I've looked at both of your flashy files, really slick btw. The most recent, is there any way to pause the text at kickme.to? It's kinda hard to read because it disappears so quickly.
Also, the lunarpages.com writing in the centre of the page, I reckon the shadow makes it look a lil messy or lost or something. Maybe a different font? Larger?
I sure hope this is constructive. I think I prefer your first attempt actually
Good on u 4 giving it a go.